Bullet

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Cool steel against my temple,
The bullet, waiting inside its dark nest
Ready to hatch inside my skull.

"Put the gun down," shout the police.
"Lower it so we can talk."
I don't feel like it,
Not willing to let go.

I'm in a conquering mood;
I want to bring the whole world to its knees
One bullet at a time,
Starting with me.

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8 Comments
LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Not being politically correct, the simplest way I can say it is,

Inside the mind of a fruitcake.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 17 years ago
Nice work

some good images, but the last stanza is far and away the best.

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 17 years ago
Wow

And here's another reason to love your writing babe. Not only are you a wonderful writer but you make poetry so deep, so intense that it's impossible not to stop and ponder on what was written.

Well done Rora, very well done :)

oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
dark power!

definatley "fav" material!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A lot of powerful emotion in a few words.

The very tightness of the poem is what makes it so strong. Almost too vivid!

Thanks, DJ

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