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suburban backyard kissing
tasted of Marlboros and
cheap whiskey
patio umbrellas
and molded plastic chairs
sliding deeper and deeper
into the white bucket seat
soft lips and hard stubble
buzz of seven and seven’s
and secondhand smoke
and the intoxication of being sixteen
tasting your nineteen-year-old lust

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
very good

This is a fine example of painting a great picture

without having to use a paint gun. Nothing hard just

smooth and visual, I like it. sandspike

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 18 years ago
Yes!

The imagery in this is intoxicating. Wow. Loved it!