comfortably numb

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bluerains
bluerains
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poetic stratum
in props of grey
are seeping away
into seashells congregating
beneath apathetic yawns
baking on a blanket
in the heat
of a thirsty sky
sharing symbiosis
in blue cozies of Stella

bluerains
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sacksackabout 18 years ago
best poem I've read in a long time.....

'nuff said!!

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 18 years ago
great...

write Blue...great feel, flow and wording mixed together to make a delightful poem!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Another appealing write

From blue's blue world.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
kickin' back

this poem almost has me prop my feet up on the desk and sink into being, comfortably numb. great write blue~

TheRainManTheRainManabout 18 years ago
Well-written

I am not a fan of Frank's paintings at all, but this poem captures one and the feeling that might come from one who is.

"the blue cozies of Stella" is an exceptional line, IMO.

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