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Click hereWasted days, weeks and months
have now grown into years.
As the two stood divided,
their hearts so full of fear.
Lost words and promises
spoken in their youth.
Now laid between them
As broken words of truth.
Eyes of darkened brown,
and ones of chocolate hue,
stare and see the other,
hurt and full of blue.
Trembled fingers touch,
lips that no longer grin.
As they turn to leave
refusing to try again.
One has tried to speak,
the other refused to hear.
So they stopped trying
and now they both are here.
Backs now face each other,
And eyes face toward the walls.
One will soon discover,
the other one will fall.
One will go away,
far away they will flee.
Searching for the answers
to their destiny.
One will stay at home,
picking up the rocks.
Trying to deal with
all the pain and shock.
In the end they'll see
mistakes they both have made.
Will they return
to face another day?
Will the love die out,
or try to work things through?
Should they just continue
the way they often do?
Ignoring what one wants,
the other will soon see,
That there is something hidden
deep inside of me.
Thanks to Victoria for her suggestions.
DC:
This one makes me so thankful for what I had. Thank You for reminding me. Ronnie W.
This is my pick !!!
So much sadness.
Aww what to do eh ~
Heartbreaking
and told with such a passion of love.
Just wonderful.
Great imagery, flow,
and so bitter sweet.
More gurl .. Give us More ~!!
A more sober tone than what I've seen from you before...
"Eyes of darkened brown,
and ones of chocolate hue,
stare and see the other,
hurt and full of blue."
You've outdone yourself RF.
there is the could have beens,
should haves , and would have if's..
your perfect example of love gone wrong,
and the result of the before said ..
Strong Write.. *winks*
-sGp-
The pain of regret
resonates so well,
as one becomes two
wondering of the other,
"Who are you?"
Well done - again.