2 rivers, sound, and sea

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We shared a life one year,
three amigos through:
2 rivers, sound and sea.
Jack Frost winds and Rod Steiger nights.

Each wave an obstacle
met head on or overtaken
Every gust shaken off
as I righted their world

I had a harmonic rhythm
a vibration along my deck
energizing their souls
electrical ballet of lust to come

She cradled my tiller
soft as a zephyr
feeling my power letting me run
He would ease then grind my sheets
exposing my belly

tenderness and intensity
we were virtual sex
a charge waiting a match
an undercurrent in ourselves

Sunset would find a cove
I was washed stem to stern
Below they would love one another
as I tacked at anchor
holding them through the night
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IF A BOAT COULD SPEAK

and maybe to remember, TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Sailing on the open waters... brings back

fond memories and you captured it well.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Beautiful

Sounds and images go together to form a very beautiful delicate rendering. A little Poetic Gem!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Nice picture you paint here;

But 'zephyr'?

Not a word you hear too often;

The most significant usage to which

I was exposed happened many years ago ~

Grade 6 vocabulary & spelling lesson.

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