Liver Spots

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Rybka
Rybka
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A redbird sang for a mate today
high in a maple across the way
Where sap still drips for nights are cold
While morning sun breaks winter's hold


       Brown earth shows

through melting drifts


                                                                                 of frozen snow ...

Liver spots


                       upon the hand                      of Old Man Winter

grow

Rybka
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Beautiful poem..

highly descriptive.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 18 years ago
late

wow this really is a gorgeous poem... all the way through

~swirls

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 19 years ago
**5**

I read this and I like the rhymeing. The words are pretty. I am sorry if you feel so old like winter dyeing.

I only know snow from the mountains, maybe you should come to California and be brown all over not just spoty!! It is warm and birds sing all year. Old Man Winter dont come here!!! ;)

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