- Erotic Poetry
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Click herea mandarin orange never tasted,
just masked any detail
found coalesced in two lips
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a honeycombed moon never poured,
never adored any sweetness,
sugar, the way that I do you,
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a spiced romance never lasted,
never cast one last glance
so importune and blue
like this...
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- COMMENTS
annaswirlsabout 19 years agoexcellent use of repeating sounds, fresh images, not easy to write a really unique love poem, you did it. Nicely done! Welcome!
Du Lacabout 19 years agoWow.. this works well for me.. I loved the selection of mandarian orange.. I felt it squirting in my mouth, the spiced romance.. hmmm.. I saw hot bodies entwined with curry, thyme and sage aromas rushing through the air..
Sensual erotic and stimulating
great work
Du~
jthserraabout 19 years agothe images, tastes and fragrances here are distinct and I love the alliteration in importune and blue... Well done.
jim : )
