- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Another Pickup Line
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Um,
excuse me...
Hello,
hi!
Can I borrow
for a while...
What?
Well, you.
Yes, borrow you,
with that
glowing seraph smile.
With your
sparkle-dancer voice
and glacier eyes,
Antarctic green.
Can I borrow
for a while
your ears,
and tell you
what I've seen.
I've seen how...
precious in measures,
you bend space
around your presence,
you bend time
around your voice
and bend my will
around your essence.
Concrete budges,
steel bars snap,
all for you.
Within your sight,
city scapes and biospheres
lean closer,
savoring the light.
Care to change my world forever?
It's so easy, just a hack.
Let me borrow you a minute...
and forget
to give you back.
- COMMENTS
duddle146about 17 years agoWitty and quite clever ~ I loved that line about borrowing you and forgetting to give you back.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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