by My Erotic Tale
I love it.
I had the pleasure of reading this
a few weeks ago, and still, I like ~!!
Humor, satire and trickery in words.
A great write Art ~ !!
More Plaese~
Nice bit of local color writing with a good ending. This was a pleasant read.
ARTTTTTTTTTT
My sides hurt and tears are running....
Love it hun and I hope you do really well....
Always, Lizzy
Lucious, RF, anon and E~
This story was first written as a poem/tale that grew into a ten chapter story currently being reviewed for publication <bigrin> (which is why I haven't submitted them all to 'Lit') I was contemplating on entering one more chapter for my second submission...any thing catch your eye?
(2) passing peanuts (3) the black hole (4) night of the Comet (5) Fishing for Vixens (6) crop circles (7)the eclipse (8)the Jedi Knight (9) Invasion of the Vixens (10) "Good Night Moon" >>> my favorite is chapter ten (he sort of actually goes to the vixen planet <bigrin>
thanks and I hope you enjoy my erotic TALE~
You are the rising comet in writing in all venues. Thank you for the best one yet. Looking for more to come.
It was sheer bootiful
Satin and Lace
That war right good readin, ET, a real knee-slapper, by crackey.
and I think.
you are very creative,
I have not read all chapters
but this one made me laugh and smile,
was quite witty !
-sGp-
Talk about neuron misfires!
And I still like that image of the volunteer fire crew, looking for pussy up in a tree (while the cat meows his plaintful tale).
Will be looking for the book.
And I thought I was a headcase! "Yer slicker than greased owl shit Art!" Good luck!
Cookie :D
Maybe just a wee bit over-the-top on the down-home rural dialect for my taste, but very interesting, and imaginative.
Rumple
Definitely original. Pretty funny. Certainly weird. And I puzzled and puzzed til my puzzler was sore...
thoroughly enjoyed your story. Bud Waswiser, my favorite character.
Keep on rockin on!
The hokey dialogue reminds me of Petticoat Junction. Perhaps this story needs a suitably "down home" theme song?
Hmmmm....I'll have to dish one up. Good luck!
Is this really the way people talk on the Trinity River? Never mind, dialogue is tough and dialectic is even harder. It's worth a "5."
LOL this was great entertainment. Thanks for the laugh and good luck with the contest :)
Well done Art, i was looking forward to you particular take on halloween.
Well worth taking the time to read. Had my husband wondering what I was reading because I was laughing.
This is a hoot hun!
Brilliantly written
as always, sooooo
funny! I needed a
laugh and this really
did the trick.
Great work babe
~ JC xxx
Just on the basis of the title alone. Got to be the best title in the contest, and the story wasn't half bad either!
Great job, MET