All Comments on 'The Initiate'

but who.s frank ?

Great story, but...

150 centimeters? a meter and a half? 4 and a half feet? But wait! 230 centimeters?! Two and a third meters? 7 feet? Those are some monsterous appendages! :)

I think you meant millimeters... or divide by 10... or just stick to good old inches, which are, I think, even in metric countries, the universal unit of manhood measurment. :)

Great story. I remember being young and wishing for an Aunt like this! Are there any cousins to add to the story? I hope you write more soon.

Great first story. Didn't understand the centimeters though. Anyway, time to unravel this knot, wouldn't you say? Can't wait for the next installment. Alan, Anna and Del...and/or maybe dear ol' Dan is the next to be initiated.

I liked it. Your style is a bit different but I could get used to it. Also, I think it was supposed to be 15 cm(about 6 in) and 23 cm (about 9 in)

Lovers "copulating" again. Damnit - rabbits copulate, goats copulate, pigs copulate; Humans in a loving relationship such as you have described 'make love'. And stop being so pseudo-technical. His sperm ejculated out of his penis; it may have come from his urethra, which is INSIDE the penis. For God's sake, stop being pseudo-knowledgeable, and just write. Which you can do! I don't know why you don't dissect the vulva while you are at at!

Your comment was more interesting than the story. WOrd son. Too bad you got your ass kicked by France at the rugby world cup, especially after all that silly dancing, war cry shit at the start. Nice day. Say hi to all them sheep. Is it true you guys are getting some kind of fart tax for the sheep?

Not to waste my time reading anymore of your stories,you seem to have a pathological[unhealthy at that]fixation with incest.I am am not saying I do not like reading incest stories,but yours leave me feeling uneasy.

[To this point only Anna was naked, and having had her fill of oral stimulation, she decided the moment had come to unbare Alan.]

Not a very strong effort from you anyhow.

Perhaps you should understand your measurements better. 230 centimeters is roughly 90 inches. Mabey you got confused or something but i thought the metric system was supposed to be better

just loved the way his aunt seduced him then got his mother to do the same now he has two rampant over-sexed females to keep happy....you just cannot beat fucking your mom and aunt at the same time - vice is nice but incest is best...hopefully he goes on and gets them both pregnant...now that would be fun.....loved it....

The story is great, but a 230 centimeter penis is about 90 inches....

Math aside, which many fixated on already. An editor would have caught the sons name change as well as the math issue. Alan became Frank for a brief time. The biggest issue however is the lack of personality, the stories are more a scientific dissertation than sexy stories.