by copperbutterfly
Good story! Will you continue with six more installments? My only suggestions is to proofread more thoroughly. I enjoyed the story, however, regardless of the "typo's" and grammatical errors. Keep working at it!
A sizzling and hot narrative. I can only hope that you bring us 6 more hot days with these two people. Keep the story coming you are doing a wonderful job. I am looking forward to the next six days. "G"
Dear Copperbutterfly. I love you so much. The story is wonderful. I wish I was Russ. but then I am Bill
This story was good enough that I wasn't bothered by the few typos. That says something significant. Thank you very much!
Please tell me there will be another! Incredibly hot story....Well written and erotic.
Copperbutterfly:
You have flat out written one whale of an erotic tale. Now for ch. 2 & 3. Thank You. Ronnie W.
When I hear women complain about not being able to find men who are single and straight, I often wonder if the complaining woman is ready to spread her legs with someone she has just met and have a good time. Few women would do as this woman did and that is a pity.
Hooterhunter
I really liked the way the two characters "clicked"...it was a story well written. Wow...I was into it! Winemaster
Romantic and sexy story, Copper. This is at least my sixth stop by here, thought about how much I'd want feedback so here I am. This my fave series so far on LIT.
Can't wait for #4, Thanks baby,
David
This is one of your best works..I am sitting here with a huge erection..now what? Can't wait to read the rest.
Snakey
I found this story when I first came across LIT as 2005 (AKA:dave_l2lp). I loved it then and still do and Copper's subsequent 3 chapters are wonderful additions to it.
It's a fave of mine. I hope you'll write some more Copper...you're my inspiration.