by Sunnie
Excellent action and dialogue! Realistic and tantalizing build up. By the time his fingers reach for her wetness I was totally involved--wanting to trade places with either one of them...haha! Totally imaginative and hot story!
Very erotic and alluring, great build up and yes and even better explosion...of words and wit. Smiles.
and very erotic. The dialogue was comfortable and believable. It was written well, with no discernable grammatical or spelling problems to trip me up as I read. All in all an excellent story and I think perhaps Grace is working on a sequel. Very good.
jim : )
GREAT story! You're a talented writer... believable dialogue and tremendous narration. Keep it up!
That was so well written, I couldn't look away!!!
Wicked story!!!!!!
Overall I thought the story was good. The sex scene was fantastic, and I've always loved teacher/student fantasies and have written some myself. The lead up to it was a little overdramatic, I thought, however... I'll check out the later stories.
I haven't read much erotica, but this was amazing. Like, seriously. It was real, so very real- no poetry or bush-beating (though plenty of eating, so to speak) to this. Though I usually prefer poetry to modern speech, this was too good to pass up. Well done!
Yes, it happens, for me, it was a bit more direct. "I want to fuck you."
The way you built the plot up, along with the action involved...this is good. I anticipate reading the next chapters. Kudos to your skill.
I loved it. You didn't go on on about details irrelevant to the story as some artists do yet you gave just enough info to make us aware of the rising action, climax, falling action and denouemont, keep up the great work
That was one of the better stories I've read in a while as far as erotica goes. Keep up the great work.
-=The Grammar Nazi=-
I've never been that lucky.... My English prof just walked out on me.
Hot stuff...yum, quite moving drama bit there, from "Awww" to "Ahhh!"
Had a lovely time w/ this - very hot ... also remember a certain History Prof. who kept being VERY friendly w/ me, oh dear Lord & she was a sizzling little creature too, also not above flashing me on occaision, sigh ... so this brought back fond memories - thanks!
I loved it.....made me want to stop taking classes online!!!
I loved your story hardcore. It's so awesome and great to imagine, especially since I'm also crushing on one teacher I had. We stayed in touch but if only this could happen...OMG.
just amazing..
absolutely amazing.
as my title says, the best I've read.
I can't wait to read the next chapters!
I have a massive crush on one of my professors at the moment... I couldn't help but think about me and him while reading your story! ;)
well done!
Another one of my favorite fantasies taking on either role. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.