All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 12: Daniel'

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curious, who was it??

I loved this chapter. It's nice to know that Laresa can get her own in when she needs to.

Another excellent story and I too am curious!!!! Great job!

There's nothing like seeing someone utterly rotten get theirs in the end, and a mystery just begging for answers later!

I'm having way to much fun reading these (and even more writing 'em)...This is a great chapter, certainly not as hot or hopefilled as many of them but that only helps to add immense flavour to the chronicals as a whole! Great job!

Your part of the story showed imagination and passion and I loved the contribution to the overall theme. I just hope I can find a way to go 2-3-4-5 instead of 4-8-22-16-7. Anyway thats a job for faq's not accolades.