All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 07'

by SEVERUSMAX

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Oh my. . .

A Genie in an open marriage. . .interesting and I'm sure very fun. A great chapter for the story of Laresa. Thanks for participating, once again, naughty, hot sex. :D ~ Red

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 17 years ago
Wonderfully naughty addition

Hot and naughty, and taking Laresa into new territory at the same time with an open marriage. Great addition to the chain.

TserancTserancover 17 years ago
Nice touch!

I love the part of his wishign them more pleasure at the end, I had been considering that for a bit, what kind of wish that might be - thanks for answering the question!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Damn

That was way too short!

Nice idea to have the genie as part of a threesome for life.

I just wish you had added some more to this chapter.

Thanks for a naughty read.

Black Tulip

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice addition

SEVERUSMAX:

Have to agree it's short, but it's a well told addition to the Laresa Tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
To much at once....

The dialogue was way too fast, along with the story line. I felt like I was watching Speed Racer talking 100 mph. The story was great, I enjoyed the introduction of the characters, but again, their interaction was too fast-pased. It left alot to be desired. Try to get more details in there and you will have an excellent read.

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