All Comments on 'Every Girl Should Have a Friend Named Betty'

A very fine crafted story. Well developed story line and characters, a touch of humor when needed (the "OK, who's Betty?" line had me cracking up in laughter ;-) and just a touch of suspence. Keep up the good work!

Keep up the good writing.

Very well written and quite funny. I really enjoyed it.

Very well written! Great surprise twist with "Alice" and "Betty." But is he going to continue? I hope so!

She started out as a real bitch, but by the end she had me laughing!

Good story, you had me going wondering about your story title, hehe.

I have enjoyed reading all of your submissions...please keep 'em comming!!!

I agree! Every girl should have a friend named Betty. Except my Alice is named Herman. Perhaps I should look into an Alice as well? ;)

I loved this story Penelope. It did the trick for me. It is easy to see why you have so many "H" stories. Write some more girl. :)

Hi and thanks for your enjoyable sense of erotica and sexuality. I will keep my hand out of my jeans just long enough to type (applaud) your story and wit, sip o' bit malt and offer you cheers! \~/ hummmmmmm.... baby!

I didn't enjoy this at all.

Wow. Like OMGzers! I was erect from the first lines THRU the end. Lovely! & like the Man in the story, I 2 thought 'Alice' was her Gf, until the Big reveal. FanTASTic tale! :P Keep writing in this style, Ok!

Love your story. It is so cute and really had me laughing in places, which makes a great mixture with eroticism. The purple rose is hilarious! The best thing is that it is about people attending to each other, to their needs, to their understandings of themselves, and to their reciprocal hunger for sexuality.

It's the only story of your's I've read, but you can bet I'll be back for more...just taking a break from my mid-terms for a few moments today. Please take it as a compliment that I'm envious of your story-telling skill.

I really enjoyed these two, they deserve more 'screen time' :)

I'll continue to read your work (I am starting from your earliest and moving forward) and hope to find Jeff & Michelle in future stories... if not, then I encourage you to bring them back :)

M

Very interesting story.Wonder how many women have such a friend

Really good and different