All Comments on 'Daddy And His Girl Caught! Ch. 03'

3 chapters of perfection!

don't write

Had me cummmmmig

mmmmmmm damn that story is hot, i was stroking my cock on every word

Don't even let up on your erotic writing. Maybe in about 19 years Daddy can also impregnate the little girl that the two of you are creating today?

...reason I didn't give this top marks is that you didn't mention mom until right at the end, almost as an afterthought. the erotic tension in this story comes from the interaction of the three characters, not just the sex between dad and daughter (brilliantly though you describe that). keep writing, please!

....and I'm mentioning you on the AH.

....but still great to see her Daddy become dominant like that. His more forceful side is emerging, which is a serious turn-on. Hope to that you continue to write. I certainly won't tell you not to. I especially look forward to how they deal with her mom.

I love your method of writing and I love the content. Keep writing and I will keep reading and loving it.