All Comments on 'Biomechasexual'

by Christian Black

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Twist

I loved the ending. This is some Twilight Zone shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So close!

I actually liked the idea of her just drifting off into space with them for the rest of her life...it has a certain "2001"/Major Tom quality about it. The addition of the researchers is too jarring for me (even though I know that's what they're supposed to do) after such a sensual experience. However, well done...a good read. ;)

rexfelisrexfelisover 19 years ago
Very interesting!

I liked this story, but what I'd like to know is, where did the toothlessness come from? Did her body physically regress?

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