by ~hellbaby~
FANTASTIC! You pulled together a lot of emotion on that one. i loved it.I found when he reached out to caress her face terribly intimate. i love this story. Does it tug at the heart strings? Yep But I loved it for all of that!
Great read. Where do they go from here?
Great story of childhood sweethearts being reunited at last. Loved it!
My friend you have it to a "T."
I lost my wife of over 34 years 9 years ago.
I've tried 6 times to write that story and it's still too raw.
I just wish there was a Liz waiting in the wings. Carry on, please.
glad I'm not the only one writing sad stories! Very well done and kept my interest!
It was great well thought out and well wrote -- kept my attention and a tear in my eye