by wildsweetone
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sounds good in your choice of subject and visuals...blue
But the imagery here is superb!
Excellent job!
Best regards,
C
you offer up in this poem. especially the p's in this part--
poised to puncture
the foot of a supposed
predator.
feels good to repeat several times. a vivid poem, makes me miss my garden
lovely work, WSO, enjoyed very much!
Ouch! I think I was stung, so vivid was your writing. :-) Seriously, very interesting poem; I was confused for a moment who was hovering and widening, though, due to a vague referent. You make interesting poems, though WSO. I'm sure many will love this one and I will be sure they see it in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.
be good, be kind, be happy but most of all watch out for the bees <grin I thought your poem was fabulous, reminded me of a poem I wrote about bees that like to hide in open coke cans, don't drink the bee (~_~) bows humble~
then why is it i feel like that bubble bee, thickened at the waist. Might trip on me...so watch where you step!...i enjoyed your write today!