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Click hereVerbosity and Pomposity
I knew a man
an intelligent sort
who tried to impress
with utterances multi-syllabic
I asked him to
please spare us do,
verbosity and pomposity
when a simple phrase will really do, like,
"Your head's up your ass."
© Leon Brozyna 2005
haha i liked this one ;) ps, thanks for the comment, but how do i read reviews?
"Your heads up your ass." Doesn't get more poetic than that. Love the lyrics and you can dance to it, I give it a 5.
ty,bd
contratian opinion, neither succeeds well as either poetry or humour in that there is little of the eureka feeling in it, no surprises. It comes off more as a flat statement.