All Comments on 'the factory of manufactured tears'

by steve porter

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dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
exploding lines.....

and a fantastic title. excellent!! don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great title

and love the poem, love the metaphor you've presented here.

lindianalindianaabout 18 years ago
Steve!!!!

Sometimes you make the words work for a living. Squeeze from them every definition. Keep it up before those suckers unionize.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I go with.....

M2394. Your style doesn't always work or I don't

get it, but this I get and its good. sandspike

Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
something more

than surface intent here. Lot to think about. I like that about your poetry, Steve, always more than meets the eye.

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