All Comments on 'Surrogate Sin'

Oh, what an Imp!

You speak so sweetly;

I want to sin!

Reminds me of an old story, the question being, "What is necessary to obtain forgiveness from sin?" as the 6 year-old answers, "Sin."

Your Poem was mentioned in Saturdays Review

Thanks for sharing ~

~ Jenn

That's a helluva prayer Imp. Well done.

Wicked girl !!

And sharp.

Your words cut through some heavy lines here and make everything oh-so-real.

Nicely done.

...to provide me with a new definition for "religious experience" *grin* Daring and delicious Imp.

I know you're not supposed to covet your neighbor's poem, but I really wish I'd written that one. What great rhythm. Thanks.

I am ready to drop to my knees in prayer. Finally a religion for the rest of us.

all at once creative and disturbing. i still don't know how i feel about the sacrilege.....but so well written