All Comments on 'Serendipity'

no real comment,

brail? I am not sure if this was intentational, if so, great.

it was supposed to b this

ET meant brail as it was used.

Cute stanza:

Sri Lanka Sri Lanka

please fuck me now

for just enough money

to by me a cow

Art.. loved it..I saw the women.. the princes.. the tears trailing behind them as an ocean filled with fish that opened their legs for these three... hence brail:

One of several small ropes attached to the leech of a sail for drawing the sail in or up.

A small net for drawing fish from a trap or a larger net into a boat

hmmm makes me think.. Serendipity... so many fish in the net of lust..which one slides through the net of love and passion to : (ps.. it goes both ways.. gender wise lol...)

quote:

Till they found a woman that was pleasing

then they claimed her and called it ... Serendipity!

Nice write..

du lac