- Erotic Poetry
- Osaka
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Osaka
what time, what wait
what surrounding these words with signs and measurements
what else stays in memory
what distant country
what not to say of this seaside road, O what sea
what to say of this intertwined message
what you are not, what you are where
O silence
what I say in your name and enough
what east, what wings, O heart, O death
what I write as the night falls
what sky suddenly breaks, the sun, O star
what world, O
what light bathes your body
as I write across your breasts
what
- COMMENTS
dr_mabeuseabout 19 years agoA poem in negative space. I liked it. "Zen me again, baby! Harder! Harder!"
sackover 19 years agoThe "who what or where game" from the 60's. I'll take the WHAT question please! Thought provoking!!
Sack
Cerriwidenover 19 years agoa well-constructed poem. It's a delight to read, either to onseself or aloud. It's relatively simple construction belies the complex yet smooth flow. Beautifully done.
WickedEveover 19 years agoand the way they lie together, urges me to read your poem several times. Okay, I had the urge. I read several times. Lovely sounding poem. Flows smoothly like long hairs on a leg. Really beautifully written.
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoYour Poem was Mentioned on the thread
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