All Comments on 'need'

Love this phrase: (com)passion

I really liked the *shudder*, for some reason in that context it made me think of back hair! lmao, good job!

Imp..

I really liked this.. I can picture you sitting there and the faces of the ones you mention rolling thru your mind. the thoughts shared by so many.. spoken by so few... I felt you swimming in my mind.. great identification! That is a sure sign of good poems... when another says... yes.. yes..!

Smiling for your prose was beautiful and clever!

du Lac

Ahhh heck, that was absolutely the best love song I

have ever heard...oh ... I meant poem~

Impressed as always, each poem out

impresses the next, very

Impressive~

I really enjoyed this, the set up, the end, and the way you wove the "other" words in, good job :)

rich, clear, beautifully woven and a bit sad. I see "want" in the verse, and "need" is the title, and I sigh, nodding agreement.

that's awesome. You have an amazing poetic voice! Good work!

so strongly in my own heart. I felt every word, every yearning syllable. As always your words touch the core.

Flipped a coin for the rating. It generously came up to the higher of the two ratings. Not sure I agree.

... on whether or not you're an idiot. You lost.

Gave me a wistful feeling on the first read - so many things matter for it to feel right! Then, it struck me as bold and pointed - yes, my needs can be filled elsewhere, but I choose you to do it. I'll be wondering which it is.

Really liked it, imp.

Crapola.

I think you've struck a chord in all of us.

Words that dance with feelings that haven't been asked to dance in a long time.

ty,bd