- Erotic Poetry
- Memphis 212 Miles
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Click hereCounting hours with you in this car,
watching your profile glide over time and miles
and See Rock City and the Bucksnort exit that always makes you smile--
I wish I played a steel guitar.
I’d write a country anthem
about a woman with a name like yours
and tip my hat down over my eyes
and sing you home.
The kind of song you can sing along to
when you’re drinking a beer with sawdust in your hair,
that makes you lay a wistful look across the table at your honey,
and she gives you a blow job in your Camaro ‘cause it’s your anniversary.
And they would know I sang about you
and I’d tell the juke box world
that love is twisty as a country road-- in wild horse saloons--
but it is straight as the crow flies in reality.
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1st line from Worm Moon by SeattleRain.
Last line from Crow Moon by Tathagata
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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turtledoveover 19 years agoI found this to be sexy-yet very romantic. If a man wrote a poem about me--I would make love to him all night long to show my appreciation. Well done, Darlin'
JenniferMidnightover 19 years agoohhhhh Mutt as a country singer...get out the spurs and cock that pistol...BABY!
WickedEveover 19 years agoreading your poetry. It's so real. This is a great line: watching your profile glide over time and miles
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoloved this poem, bben through rock town on my way past memphis way many a time...wonderful poem! the big river and bridge...yep stirred old memories loose with this one...grin
LilDarlinover 19 years agoThis one is Nummy~~!!
I loved the flow here. It just carries us along, as if we are in the car with ya (mmmm *eyes closed* for the anniversay part<chuckles>).
Keep'm Coming~~!!
annaswirlsover 19 years agoPerfect.
You should learn how to play the steel guitar.
I felt the character in this poem and I sincerely liked him. I think he should be played by Bradd Pitt. Brad Pitt and a steel guitar poet on a road trip. Go write the screen play. :) Get Lyle Lovet to do the sound track. Go on, Mutt, time is a tickin....
