All Comments on 'Like This'

I like the repetition of like this. Good poem.

the images, tastes and fragrances here are distinct and I love the alliteration in importune and blue... Well done.

jim : )

Wow.. this works well for me.. I loved the selection of mandarian orange.. I felt it squirting in my mouth, the spiced romance.. hmmm.. I saw hot bodies entwined with curry, thyme and sage aromas rushing through the air..

Sensual erotic and stimulating

great work

Du~

excellent use of repeating sounds, fresh images, not easy to write a really unique love poem, you did it. Nicely done! Welcome!