All Comments on 'K.C. Crystal Run 010298'

Thank you for the most enjoyable read! I was swept along with the flow of words and images. My tongue did stumble a place or two and perhaps the poem could be tweaked a little, but you might want to let it rest for awhile, and then come back and read it with a dispassionate eye as if it were not your own work.

Please keep writing and sharing your work with us.

This poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Poetry Forum.

has been mentioned in todays reviews

very interesting, I will be watching for more of your stuff as it comes out, I hope you intend on staying a while. I am skimming a week of poetry tonight, just wanted to say Hi and keep on truckin'