All Comments on 'Innocuous'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
bandelero

if the sun sets on my words are they no longer heard? Si?

<"spins" cliber open, checking rounds> 5 bullets in your poem "Bang, Bang Bang Bang Bang Click" (Magnificent 7 <wait it only goes to five ^)and I'll see you at sunset tomorrow (friday night shoot out ) <grinin'>

Innocucous was witty,

clever and very, superbly written.

I bet nobody likes to play scrabble with you <grin>

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
You

are a very good poet.

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