by My Erotic Tail
Im not a fan of rhymes,and is more of a rhyme than real poetry, but this is catchy, keep working, you show great promise..just remember the difference between rhymes and poetry. Its like apples and oranges, two differnt things
Something magical in the words, "I left you standing in a stormy way..." What poignancy, and tenderness filled with palpable regret.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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