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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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BLACK BARTBLACK BARTover 18 years ago
Heart touching

Well written, it reaches deep to ones soul, bringing back the fears and pains of a child, something we've all felt at one time...

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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Good job with the repetition. I like how you continue in each strophe with the last word in the strophe above. It makes the poem much more interesting.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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From the eyes of a child this small

These words speak of a tragedy of epic proportion.

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