by suitep
Very very emotionl read.
Very gentle flow and sparkling
imagery.
More Please ~
in the new poems review thread:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16252040#post16252040
There is a lot going on in this poem, tangible emotion. I enjoyed this read. I wanted it to end with :
"Taped and tied down in a corner
you can find a very small and unnoticed
me, praying to never be
brought back to these places."
I am not saying I would like to see the current ending cut, I just think that rearranged, this would be a solid ending. Just my itty bitty opinionitty. :)
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