All Comments on 'Faithful'

There is a lot going on in this poem, tangible emotion. I enjoyed this read. I wanted it to end with :

"Taped and tied down in a corner

you can find a very small and unnoticed

me, praying to never be

brought back to these places."

I am not saying I would like to see the current ending cut, I just think that rearranged, this would be a solid ending. Just my itty bitty opinionitty. :)

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annaswirls

in the new poems review thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16252040#post16252040

Very very emotionl read.

Very gentle flow and sparkling

imagery.

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