All Comments on 'Failed foothold'

your poem began with humor and ended with sadness and it made the transition in a marvelous way (~_~) I enjoyed your write.

the ending brought a punch I wasn't anticipating ... sad.

I liked a lot of the use of repetition here and liked the slow reveal. I might look at the 'looking' repetition because it was unclear what the repetition was pointing to. (Repetition makes me feel like I'm supposed to be looking some direction for some bigger message. Might be able to use that to fuller advantage. Generally though (aside from that nitpick) a fine poem. :-)

quite a clever little venture..kinda like the Richard Bach book...A Bridge Across Forever...the breakdown of the web...I enjoyed the pen ...blue

Oh sugar, it was beautiful. So full of emotion, that I too understood, I have stood in these confused and angry shoes.

and cried and it was for real. thank you for the new tears, my admiration of you grows ever deeper. Now on a new level.

thank you for your poetry.

InnerKitty