All Comments on 'Died for Love'

Wow. Leaves me a bit speachless.

I was not expecting, but then again

the title shoulda told me, eh.

I loved your meter and the imagery

came through crystal clear. The dove

... the nail in the coffin.

Nice write here Roze ~

you asked and since I have a moment.

You tell a fine story in your poem and use some nice language, but, I think you stretch for a rhyme sometimes, forcing the line to fit into the meter of your pattern.

I liked what you've done, anyway, and hope to see more of you on the poetry forum. Someone eager to learn and develop their style is always welcome, in my view.

Thanks for sharing, Roze. We'll see you again soon.

Carrie

Welcome to Lit

With this promising write.

I'll send you suggestions,

One possible way to improve;

Tightening it up would also help

And watch for that spelling

The better the verse, the more it distracts.

...thought and nicely written