All Comments on 'Constellations'

by foehn

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
raised eyebrow

"They only shine"

'only'?? I should be so lucky to shine like that. Thanks, Fern!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
this poem is mentioned

on the poetry review thread, along with your other poem. :)

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
cool

Loved the rhyme and the layout. You left a lot unsaid

about a vast subject. Thanks cool for I'll be seeing the

stars when my hits the pillow soon..

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Really neat

No profound and insightful feedback here. Just wanted to say that.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A light little piece on the stars at night done so very well.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

----------

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
I WONDER WITH THEIR LACK OF KNOWLEDGE

if they realize they are a Sun. TK U MLJ LV NV

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous