by gauchecritic
This is a refined, yet emotionally palpable, expression of a seemingly profound grief; the commingling of nature with emotion is very "Hardyesque", the words painfully precise (either is not easy, even for a skilled and experienced writer/poet). Form and content - how rare to read it as one with a heart and mind (the writer's *and* the reader's). Have a tender kiss wherever you'd receive it, Gauche. - Perdita