All Comments on 'Breathe In, Breathe Out'

can not be contained but in the heart...and yet, you have captured its very innocent essence within your verse. Never stop writing.

so very much love,

v~

I've felt this way before, and you illustrated the moment so nicely it was like being back there again. Beautiful images and sentiments you've painted here, Rae. Great first submission. I'm proud.

~lucky

You did a great job of capturing the paradox of love, that it can be as simple as breathing and yet so overwhelming to take our breath away.

Wonderful introduction.

I love the repeated theme beginning each stanza!

Very powerful, very emotional, very descriptive!

Wonderful poem...and you're first time!!! Congratulations!!And thank you for submitting this wonderful poem!

Honey

Very good first try

Shows much potential and talent here;

Keep on submitting.