All Comments on 'Being Single'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
light a fire?

I'd like to strike a MATCH

and heat you up <grinin'>

Hey sweetie, been awhile

Beeee good be kind but most of all ...

be happy, you need a happy meal? (~_*) me too!

oh yea great poem~

some very nice lines

I like the 'some ones always around as a new born

and some get use to it and want it till they die' (cool)

funny how opposites attract, like a ...ying yang!

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
dilemnas..

I enjoyed this work.. the contrasts and the use of more than one perspective on a tender "social" dilemna.. I very much felt the twisting in the following:

quote:

As for me I say, it has it's ups as well as it's downs

You have your times of smiles, and sometimes of frowns

When we are newborns, there is always someone close by

Some of us get use to that, and want it till we die

Powerful this last line...

thank you for the write..

du lac

seranadeseranadeover 19 years ago
sleeping single

in a double bed?

got room for one more?

love your poem (hug)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Being single has its moment, but really, it sucks. But given the chance to return to the married life I knew, I'll keep lonely bachelorhood until that option changes!

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
choices

Single or not ~ very few pledge to live the single life for long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOVED IT

GREAT WORK LOVED IT LOOK FORWARD TO MORE

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WITH OUT A DOUBT

there are various decescion for being both, TK U MLJ LV NV

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