All Comments on 'Another Pickup Line'

all I can say is wow!! if any man had ever said something like that to me, well, yeah, you can borrow me and please, **please** forget to send me back :)

Liar highlighted this one. A wonderful conversation, and hey, any poem with concrete and steel will grab my attention, though most not as well as this poem did. Well done.

jim : )

which part do I close my eyes dreamily and sink into?

I can't pick one line that doesn't whisper gently and ever so persuasively. :rose:

wonderful. The last line is especially great, has snap, wit, and sweetness.

A thoroughly fun read that was well thought out and put together.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

----------

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

----------

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

----------

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

----------

Witty and quite clever ~ I loved that line about borrowing you and forgetting to give you back.