by rarebreed21
i've never anything that i can relate to so closely. it is haunting. and you express it so clearly and so exact. ty for writing this.
Love as an injured little sparrow ~ mercy has his eye on the
the little sparrow, lest the little fellow fall.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.
Read this slowly and thoughtfully;
You can feel the pain of the battered spouse becoming trapped in a nightmare universe.
Yep Loved it! Fantastic stuff
enjoyed every word, i think
this is one of my favorites
of yours and i know i will read
it many more times.
Thank you for the words
I loved them all.
~ J