Incest/Taboo Story Comments

Ok, I liked the story but, the raping of his mother, definitely not; and will admit curiosity how he handled her need for daily ablutions.

And something common in LIT mother/son stories where the son is verbally abusive referring to his mother as whore and other demeaning responses....

Wonderful start. I can hardly wait to see where this one goes!

Yup, loved the story.

I liked the story.

It felt like a narrative at times but that did not detract from the context of the story.

Good start.

Excellent!!

Great story. Cut out all the mentions of rape and it would be five stars

why is this in the incest category really a disappointment

Very nice and makes glad i read it

Mr Brady please continue this series. I find it such a turn on. And really the sister needs him. Maybe menage amour with all three.... I wait up to see the series hit the pages every day.

Thanks

I think we need some fluff. Setting (where was the date), what were they wearing before the

bedroom, more of what she looked like (we saw that Mom thing coming a mile away, btw).

For what it is, 4 ⭐️

M

Nice one!

Looking forward to chapter 2.

This sounds to me like a sort of dear diary tale, I have:-)e also had similar feelings towards a family member, but my guiding principle has always been cherish what you have or you risk losing everything. I would hate that.

Great story, you should definitely continue it.

more of this story please

Good story with attention to detail. I can't wait for the next chapter.

First, I have to agree.. the interlude broke the flow of the story. Nonetheless the slow burn was one of the best i have ever red.. omg.. amazing.. The climax and sex felt short, could be much longer and more detailed.. Still 5/5

Great story. Very exciting and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Oh my mother and son incest, gotta love it! Another very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision...

Loved the story- what a nice ending

Enjoyed your story very much. Please continue and let the teacher participate a bit more …

Please don't change topics in the middle of a sentence or a paragraph, please. Could have been a good story

good story. would like to read a better description of his cock when sydney finally sees it. Specifically how many inches. Also, are you working on any more penis expansion pieces?

YIkes! Lots of fun although getting a bit repetitive. Perhaps that is why the author has apparently abandoned this story. It has been almost 7 years since the last chapter was published.

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Next chapter(s) could have been a bit interesting as dad would probably witness his daughters...

Please write more of Alanah too! How she gives a thrill to an Indian nerdy student from her high school, who had always wanted to fuck her tits. Because she is so sexy.

You are an awesome writer! Please continue writing!!!

Just as I was getting up, my son's hand grabbed my wrist and pulled me back on the bed. "Since I'm giving you your money and clothes, I need to fuck you one more time," my son growled.

Excellent story !!! I’d love to read the next chapter !!! Please write more like this !!!

He should have knocked at least one of them up.

This reads a lot better if I read it with an Indian accent. Sam's long flight to India will leave him hot and bothered until his Grandmother sees fit to relieve him of that tension.

I loved it. Mother/son romances and penetration is such a turn on.

Its definitely good when a son fucks his mother and makes love to her in debauchery behind the foolish husband's back. However, we need more pussy hair. We need bush and a nice hairy crotch. A hirsute ass crack. Its hard to imagine a woman getting pregnant from her own son when...

The gay sex doesn't bother me because it This series was great just a way for some writers to move a story line in a unique different way. This series was great because it made me live my younger (too young to mention) days and later one time at an orgy where my sister, my aunt...

Soo...When's the rest of the story coming? A nice tale but it ended so abruptly without proper closure.5/5

Its certainly a delight when a young man fucks his mother, and its a delight for his friend to fuck her as well. Its always good when the younger generation gets back inside and pumps cum in the slut that birthed him. But yes, we do need more discussion regarding bush, hirsute crotch...

Well written, plot clearly planned and with a so. so sensible and realistic ending.