Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Great chapter. I love the developing relationship between Greg and the others in town, especially his teacher.

I'm hooked! Eager for the next one!!

Adequate. lol.

Very well written. I will have to go back now and read the preceding 15 installments….

Another ruined story. Its almost impressive how bad you twisted it so fast. May i suggest leaving writing behind and picking up a wendys shift to spare us from looking as more of your “work”.

Curiouser and curiouser. This one was out of this world. ;-) What an imagination to devise this form of coitus. Where is this all going? Is it a dream or an alternate reality? The purpose unknown. Keep 'em coming.

Great chapter can't wait for the next part

amazing work, i started reading it for the smut and stayed for the plot.

Personally not into the fisting horse stuff but to each their own, other than that though it seriously was a fun and enjoyable read, some nice character development, some action-packed scenes and overall good read. Can't wait for chapter 3!!!!

Thank you for the story, I'll be back whenever you are. 5*

Wow! Just wow!

I am not really into Femdom, but your world and your great writing style got me hooked.

Very well done and thank you for sharing it with us.

I am enjoying this story...it has just the right twists and turns...AND more

SR

Random thought: would a three-way-switch work?

Some day I want to read how the other side of The Quilt operates…

Whole bunch of cretins not reading the harem tag on this.

Argh! I'm devastated that it's stopping here. I want more more more! Ha. It is a good place to pause though I'll admit. This has been by far my favorite story this year, if not longer, and I'm really glad you wrote it. Thanks for writing!

The rest of the story is in patreon. Unfinished and slow going due to Teflers health issues, but still alive.

Agree with Anonymous from 6 months ago, with a cavite. The Author is Canadian, so there would be a small degree of English in the language, same goes for Aussies and Kiwis. Yes "Cheerio" means goodbye, mostly used by some of the English upper class, but not in other classes now. Unfortunately...

Damn.

POV masterclass. 💯🔥🔥🔥🚀 Best. Chapter. Ever.

Good story, interesting weapon , tongue kiss. Kinda rooting for earth, just too bad so many of the 7.x billion people are so worthless feckless traitorous to all but themselves. rk

Thank you Gortmundy, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I honestly hadn't even realized Literotica had illustrated stories, Underdog_13. I don't really want to have to delete and republish though. But your point is taken. I also consider the illustrations pretty important to the...

I very much enjoyed this chaper. At first, I was peeved at the reversal in time, but the lore and explanation was superb. Thanks for another great installment.

I like the patient approach to world building you have taken here.

A couple questions and musings:

Does the many worlds theory hold water in your universe? If so, what would that mean to a Librarian?

Do you suppose any mage has ever had one of the first people to be their tutor?...

I have a small problem with your writing. I would like you to spend 100% of your writing time on The Bunker. And 100% of your writing time on Dave in Dallas. The only solution I can see is for you to somehow achieve at least a doubling of your output. More would be better, although...

Just about back to 🌎 what on 🌎 powers your imagination it's always a five star story.

Tournament arc seems odd at this point of power level, but will have to see.

The start of each year for 3 months, is such an odd release schedule, but eh whatever works best for your writing style I guess. I'd think 3 months on 3 months off would make more sense, but again those...

Loved it.

They still need a sustainable source of protein. Farm animals will be hard to come by.

This chapter is very very good!

Chapter 7 has been submitted.

Wonderful episode! I await news of the sisters the cop, and the Beast.

Never really enjoyed cliff hangers. Gotta reduce this to a 4.

Excellent! No problem with the Daddy reference. It's coming across more as a somewhat submissive meaning that meaning male parent. Keep going with it, as well as thus wonderful story. Thank you! 5+

Great Work!!!