Poetry Comments & Feedback

Nice. I cannot say if it is a man or woman calling out to touch. It is gender neutral and can fit any partner of any orientation.

You gave my material a chance so I thought I'd return the favor! Turns out this was exceptionally deep and well written. Loving others does indeed require loving ourselves,or at least loving pieces of ourselves. It's a struggle to achieve that but worth it!

Thank you for the kind words, everyone.

Our 69-word arrangement was fun.

Two stanzas of six lines became sublime,

Like “turning” my weakness slowly into a nine.

Yes! Was there more than the kiss though? Dirty minds want to know. ;-)

So hot, sticky sweet..

Beautiful

Thanks for your ‘comment’ re: Red Wine … No Panties” !

… there are many ways to enjoy sex with a really fine woman.

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Take Care, Stay Safe. Levi

This is only the second of your work that i have read so far, But i enjoyed it and I plan to read all the others as well

This is incredible.

Such a sweet and sexy exchange between characters. Did she order extra cream?

So beautiful.

Eloquent & well written. I love this.

Well written. I love Leonard Cohen.

10 Big Blazing Stars for a fun little ditty. Thanks for the effort. Buster2U

What a truly beautiful poem my darling, so full of love and erotic desire xxxxx

Thank you so much, Wag xxxxx

nicely done, a nice image of desire

You write beautifully, thank you for sharing part of yourself with us.

Maybe it's sex. Maybe it's love.

But it certainly is fun!

Hard to read, knowing you were hurting. Honest and brave honey xxx

Thank you Pixie x

Amazing

Breathtaking in its mixture of basic carnal needs combined with such evocative words that come alive. Well done

Your personification of Nature is sensuous and intimate.

Well done!

Mythical proportions of lust and carnal consummation!

Love it!

Ommmggggggg omg l love 💕 it. It’s exactly how I feel due this being my secret, I feel so constrained but when I’m chatting with my new friends omgg the sex was to explode out of me.. omg

Kellie 💜🩷❤️

Sweet.

Moving on, Growing up.

What doth youth know of depth beyond a mirrors 1D lie?

Last night, she held the broomsword, while her corpulent knight tried to budge the fridge.

Two shriekers as the four inch dragon raced, all too successfuly, for its cave of safety below the cabinets....

You have raised my pulse with this one, DampKitten.

Sweet, romantic & beautiful.

I love poems like this that make me think. Well written. Really deep & profound.

Incredibly tranquil & beautiful.

Reminds me of the way things are right now. Dark.

Really incredible. I love this.

This made me hurt & cry.

Reminds me of too many memories I'm trying to forget.