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Possibly the most powerful story you've posted. As far as posting Brother Jones' sermon her on Literotica; I believe Christ went to the sinners, the saints wouldn't need him (as much). And what more of a tribute could you pay to a preacher trying to save souls than to post this...

WAY TOO Political! I guess you couldn’t help yourself but as Michael Jordon famously is quoted as saying ‘everybody wears shoes’ when asked to go political. I am here to be entertained not politics. I can only point out you went off kilter on this pathetic writing! I would say...

Painful, terrible, repulsive, and horrifying, yet revealing, redemptive, hopeful, warm and even tender - in short, magnificent. This is art.

I wish through my tears that I could give more than five insignificant stars.

Sounds like Lisa is a power figure...

Very nice treatment of the 'ego' argument.

Good story. Thanks. Would have been nice to know why the Wilsons were murdered.

She is effing stupid to keep on digging, you portray her as an inteigent person but she has soooo effed up by not confronting her husband at this point (or before) you think the reader is stupid to keep on going. sorry dude but you have extended the beliefe of reality that i have...

Nice ending!

5

Nice to know of a devout pride of Maryland. I was woefully ignorant of the eastern store's legacy. The many Methodists had a strong influence from Roger William's Methodist's roots fron Rhode Island? (Another 'small state' in size?)

"Look if Israel stopped taking over the West Bank land and giving it away to Israelites, a long term peace could occur!"

Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Oh you simple simple fool.

You think this would change anything with Hamas?

Think about what they chant. "From the river to the...

Looking forward to the next part. You have me wondering what is mysterious about her and now the house.

Interesting beginning!

5

Picking up was in reference to the who done it aspect of the story!! Thanks for sharing.

Your writings are weird as hell, but they are VERY thought provoking. Good stuff. We all think like this, but we never actually act on our thoughts. Keep writing. 5stars

@Eaststand1306

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@chytown... Picking up? Only three chapters are remaining. I had charades, car chases, a rear-end collision, violent confrontations leading to injuries, and a murder. I hope it's picking up. Thanks for following his story and the comments.

LOL 5 stars

Just as fictional and better writing than the Steele Dossier and Lamestream Media "reporting."

Thanks for the chuckles.

Best story I have read yet on Literotica. Longhorn_07 this is your best story . If you publish the story I have no doubt it wil be a best seller. Looking forward to reading much more of your work. Please keep writing!

@ Anonymous do a run of those T's there a huge market waiting for them!

You write and produce the most horrible characters I have ever had the misfortune to read. The husband is always a man devoid of any back bone and is willing to accept any child his awful wife knocks out.

It is obvious you have never been betrayed by your partner/wife/lover as you...

I liked the first part, but the second seemed too simple, almost a copout.

We need to remember the law while it tries to uphold justice often falls short, it never fails the law but it does true justice. [and that has no baring to US politics currently playing out; as both side claim the argument of perverted justice]

OMG he has all he needs to divorce cleanly and get out. Leave her with the old bag.

*****Great beginning a little weird, but very entertaining. Looking forward to part. 02. Thanks for sharing.

*****Thanks for sharing the storyline seems to be picking up!!

***Thanks for the read.

Vignette!!

These short/sweet, to-the-point writings used to be called vignettes! Now I can rest better...

Mr. Thomas, you have written an exemplary piece, a "word photo" that needs no more words to provide a crystal clear picture of this facet of true love. Thank you.

5🌟

I really loved this story, third time reading and still just as enjoyable ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

***Thanks for the read.

@JusteenK… thanks. I’m an Elvis fan. Of course this story is named for his best song (IMO). The song and that lyric are literally an inspiration for this story as I was looking for a fresh angle to write a detective story from. And I had to cut off the last world, lake, because...

Nice Costello lyric reference on top of the story title. 5 stars just for that.

long, but a very good story. Living in a county next to Bexar, I see the corruption there in the party that has run Bexar & San Antonio for years.

It is like watching a bathtub drain round and round iPod a soap sliver gets caught more water runs thue soap shrinks water pours out again. AND We SET watching thinking will it ever end! Sorry *

Jonathan Swift comes to mind. An alternate universe - if only....

Damn it! You made me cry! I agree, gem of a story.