Reluctance & Ravishment Story Comments

Great story, one of your best!

English is not my native language, I use a translator.

A well-written story so far.

Would love to read it to the end.

Very different story approach. Well done.

No the confession isn't a flaw (previous commenter).

It's similar to Craptain Planet's style. An extremely rare form of storytelling that is both humorous and erotic at the same time. Looking forward for more. Thank you for your story.

It is nice to see a story were the couple do thing for fun and not hate each other. Keep writing!

I feel like the granddaughter submitted too fast. Ik this is fantasy but she could've tried putting up more of a fight. Also what is his dick like..? and her tits? I'm not much for incredibly long stories but this was rather short with what seems to be a lot of information missing

Oh I hope she will continue to work for the brothers as Dafni. With a whole new set of responsibilities... Thank You for another part of this ultimate series.

Can I send Sylvia a challenge?

Go to the mall. Find a sex shop. Buy a dildo with a suction cup there. Go to the mall toilet. Put the dild to the wall and fuck yourself by filming a video.

Sequel please

It's an awful thing that happened to you. The pain and the humiliation. But it strangely made you, you. Reading this is a rollercoaster of emotions for me. From feeling fear for you, to wanting to protect the girl in the story. But she is just realizing what she is going to be. What...

I hope more to come!

I enjoyed this, yeah, I don't understand why some people criticize a writer for tackling certain subjects. This is all assumed to be fiction.

Maybe the dumbest thing I have ever read.

Completely unrelated, but I don't think Anna has used the restroom in like 5 days at this point. Like not even mentioned having the urge. She's either been with Vo'ren or stuck in his tent this entire time. Not calling it a plot hole, and not saying you need to address it, but it's...

Please comeback and write more!!

This was definitely worth the long wait. Cannot wait to read the next chapter.

I enjoyed this short story. I agree with the other reviewer that the impregnation could have been described in more detail. This seems like a story that could have a second part to it. Maybe ICD becomes a special day for the two of them...

Very hot!

What was the other question he didn't ask???

A lot of content in 1k words, I look forward to more.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

maybe an athlete next? a real jock? college qb there on scholarship?

The best story in the world ngl

I’m not usually into NC but this was good. I would’ve spent some time telling how crestfallen she was, having been violated by someone she’d trusted, but perhaps the tears are enough. 5* either way.

Thank you, my favorite author here on lit always full of new ideas, gor this great story!

oh this looks promising, looking forward to seeing where it goes

Interesting premise...but totally incoherent.

I’ve been reading stories here for years but never joined. I joined today to say how much I’ve enjoyed this one, and hope it continues

He should have killed Brady a long time ago. No one would have thought twice about a cancer infested smoke stack during in his sleep from being poisoned over time, but to enter that building without some kind of support or plan B and some kind of weapon, makes zero sense

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We are so pleased you have read and understood the whole story. We both believe that a little ambiguity, where the reader is encouraged to use their own imagination, is the key to good storytelling.

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How I missed this story in all of your other ones, I will not understand. Read your Shepard stories ages ago, along with some other, but never read this until just now. I was missing out. Such an amazing story. Put it right up there in my top 5 all time favorites!!! Would love to...

I'm sorry, unless her husband is deaf, blind or brain damaged, there's no way he could avoid the signs. Cheating sluts always give off signs and smells that doom them.

The twist at the end was very well done. Really enjoyed.

As many commenters have stated, this story keeps developing amazingly and I am also in its chokehold and at its mercy 🤣 You’re so incredibly talented, take all the time you need! I’d like to think that Vo’Ren isn’t ignorant to the fact Anna still has her phone and has his suspicions...

Great story so far. Interesting to see where it goes.

This was great a 5 star story for sure. Don't know what you have in mind but hopefully her roommate is behind this, and is planning on using her as her own plaything. whatever you do if it is like the first part I can't wait