Mind Control Story Comments

When the people and the story keep me reading, it's fun. Oh and the sex is like whipped cream on a p___y

This story keeps getting better. Can’t wait for next installment.

That was the hottest thing I've read all year, well done

love this story and all the others in this setting. Cannot wait for the next installment.

Great work , yet again. I'm feeling either Welcome to the Jungle or the Immigrant Song.

It might be appropriate to divert to a side story in which a bunch of laboratory types are going nuts trying to analyze how Vanessa's immaculate inoculation could be possible without direct injection of the serum. And, I continue to expect her missing internal lady parts to regenerate,...

Is it BYOB by System of a Down?

lol, this is a dead story

"Addie looked thoughtful. "What about New Zealand?""

hoo boy... I know we're about a month out, timeline-wise, from the big reveal from QT2, but that gave me chills

Stopped reading when he revealed his sister hasn't gone to highschool yet. What the fuck dude.

oh, this is great ... finally ... thepastor and tommy and daddy i love all this sucking of titties these girls are great ... where are they .... we need to clone them ... this is the kind of female every real man wants ... they need those titties and sucking mouths ... mouths sucking...

Immigrant Song is what popped into my head but I thought it was too much of a cliché at this point

Fun story.

lol... what a story! It's definitely quite creative and funny , though not quite erotic

Crazy train

Fantastic as always. And as usual, I'll be checking daily for the next chapter!!

It was Surf Rider by The Lively Ones and nothing you can say will convince me otherwise.

Ahhhhh I need more!

Please don't stop now. Good ramp up.

needs a final chapter, off the deep end! no holds barred

Weezer.

- Anonymous One

Nice change of perspective ... to what the genie experiences.

She's so unselfish, and doesn't get her happily ever after. Hmm... but perhaps that's how it's meant to be? She gets her pleasure from serving, but has to leave. It's poetic, really.

Hmm ok I get it now. It's an interesting story, a good one actually, considering that most other stories are about female bimbofication. This is the male equivalent.

Definitely a strange story.... I don't know how to rate it.

As usual really enjoy your stories

Say it Ain’t so, weezer. Rivers Cuomo, but solid nod to Perry Como. Don’t tell the originator but this story line in the quaranteam universe is by far the best. Thanks for writing and sharing quality stories with great threads AND believable, well written dialogue.

Good stuff. I'm wondering who the next lady Harrison adds to his stable.

The song? Manowar The Power of my Sword.....

Mythical points for Weezer? No man lol...

Love your stuff Break, always looking forward to more. 5*

Keep up the good work. Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Damn I hate cliffhangers, this one especially!

Loving your spin-off. It actually started me on the WHOLE series.

Thank you and keep up the great writings

Great chapter!!!!!!

Can’t wait for the next one!!!!!

Because the three women are such asshoĺes to him, he should see how his cock fits.

Thanks for the chapters!

Weezer: Say it ain’t so.

good update, need to have more pregnant partners within the teams of each story series