Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

Our daughter Sophia had no idea about me and her mother's naughty cocaine habit! Most Fridays we would have a good drink and a little coke just to spice things up, sex while being high on coke is awesome but nothing comes close to what happened when Sophia and her boyfriend Ben came...

Amazing series, Marianne you deserve 100 of these young cocks.

Tell us more about their energy and naiveness. Do you also entertain any older but fit user?

You need a proofreader and a content editor, badly.

FYI, when writing dialogue, the narrative associated with the dialogue (such as He said) is part of the same sentence AND paragraph as the dialogue. Do NOT but a paragraph break between the two parts.

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That is a great story and first chapter. No way this can stand alone, you did a wonderful job of creating characters we care about and want to hear more from. Nicely done.

The dishonesty is too much.

All your stories are great, but.......there is a common element. AGE. OK, I like older women too, but NEVER refer to them as "ELDERLY". I mean 61, c'mon, elderly is 80+, 60's is midlife.

Every story is predictably old, hairy, stockings, garters.....etc. With a few changes every...

"....he loved Mrs Pescadero's PE class...."

OK, it's been a while since I was in high school.

OK...it's been a very long while.....a very, very long while....but who's counting....?

But...is this a thing nowadays? a woman teaching a boys PE class?

Really digging the story, until the last part. They love each other, but don't work the distance thing out. Bullshit.

Hot. I am wet for another chapter (blush)

Love married sluts converted to debauchery

Delightful story!

5

Solid first story.

Absolutely red hot. Brilliant

Hot story. Touches on a male fantasy even though IRL I’d not want to touch my wife’s parents.

Thank you all for the wonderful comments (both public and anonymous), feedback and votes. I'm overjoyed seeing my first story get such a warm reception. While I do have ideas of where I would want a further storyline to go, please don't expect a new chapter any time soon. If and when...

Is there more

I think comentarista82 has some real issues. I picture comentarista82 as one who has an ego larger than their intelligence. I would bet they couldn't write a story that would be of interest to anyone. Their comments which are non intellectual , You blah, blah ,blah you poor sole.

I enjoyed this story very much. I wish I had such open friends. Lol

Well, You lived up to my expectations and hope for another wonderful journey. You are truly talented writer not in a smutty way, but one who truly understands the emotions of individuals. You lead an individual down a path of emotions and joy that not many writers can do you truly...

Great story it reminds me of the lady at our church. that plays piano. She is always flirting and showing her goods.

I would have never tried anything with her if she hadn't exposed her goods to me. She's in her mid-seventies now and still enjoys sex. Wish i could be with her more...

Very informative.

Regarding the age stuff, it was minor overlooked error, I had it he was 70 writing that at the time. Apologies. Will fix that

It's a common occurrence for many reviewers to personally relate to the storyline they are analyzing; every such relationship is a tribute to the author's ability to somehow reach into those things that make us inherently human. It usually doesn't take much to draw us in, for we...

I think making a dream flow into reality captures life. His faithfulness instills the real meaning of life. Stories many times imitate life but not the commitment between a man and a woman. You did all that and more. Bravo you are a excellent writer and look forward to reading more...

Ugly

Good stuff. a great Christmas story. 5 stars. Thanks for posting.

Loved the story, like a couple of others though I would have liked him with Lori. Dessertman, age is only a number!

somewhere east of Omaha

The backyard peekings are pretty erotic, your description of Cindy is definitely worth drooling over, but 60 year old Richard being such a satyr is unfortunately unbelievable. Also the change from a grieving widow to a insatiable bimbo is a little too rushed. But all in all its...

Great story. Their first liaison in the courtyard was one of the most erotic I have ever read. I almost came in my pants. The teasing and fantasising in the previous 2 pages not only peaked their libidos , it got my dick to full attention too. But whereas Gabe came in the babe because...

Blackmail sounds like a good idea to me. Maybe future stories. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

I don’t understand you, You’ve so many series stories and you leave us with an unfinished one. That’s not fair

Nicely done Linda, nicely done indeed! Reminds me of my mother-in-law after my divorce! Please continue the story!

Will there be a part 3 soon?

One hot devious milf and a young BBC makes for a hot combo, I'm envious. We split amicably when we were both 48, when our two sons were in college. A brunette with a few gray streaks, 5'6' with a little extra here and while my tits were not defying gravity, I could still give my...