Loving Wives Story Comments

That's actually a very romantic story 5stars

Ouch!

This needs to be finished. Betrayed by his fiancé and his own brother is tough to take. It it his final inspection tour the next day because he is retiring or because he is going to go postal?

Loved it great writing

Brilliant exceptional I loved it can we have some more, please 5 stars just aren't enough

Glad to see you are back. Stay safe.

Another excellent tale! 5*

I get the anger. And the disgust with both the show pony and the shallow woman who is enamored by him.

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But how in the world does his brother in arms (squared) not know who his fiance is?

Stuff like this really does happen.

Great story!!! You are a very talented writer! Congratulations!!!

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Maybe they will all get what is due them!

5

Really... like any man would think after hearing everything that it was medical..

4 stars. It was 5 stars till MC gave up his unborn child to be raised by a lowlife.

Depending on the date this was supposed to be set in, I knew if three clubs like this that paid off who they needed to and stayed around until the late 90s. It reads like real life if you knew the life and it was a good time for a while but you get burned out by living that hard nightly....

Meh. Three stars. Nothing here folks, just move along.

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JPB

"Please Bill, its not what you think"

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That is not possible as all Bill does is think...he's thought of everything by now!

6 STARS!

Next chapter coming soon or just read the telephone book from Shitville south of Santa Crapola de la Amnesia.

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Resonates my experiences. Depressing. After 3 attempts my wife finally succeeded suicide. I am shunned. The do gooders have schadenfreude.

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"I had been doing a lot of thinking over the last couple of months..." Think think think. She's cheating on me...think think think... I don't know what to do...think think think... Maybe I should do something...think think think...

Man...I sometimes wonder about the commenters here. You start off describing that this story has, 'extramarital flirtations, unwilling cuckoldry, and wild rationalizing'...then many complain that it has, 'extramarital flirtations, unwilling cuckoldry, and wild rationalizing'. Kinda...

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Wow poor little thick boy with a fragile ego couldn't take the wife smashing it in real life.

Nothing to do with her cheating, which we never find out, poor small dick couldn't handle a successful woman. So he ended up with a slut that would chase after and sleep with a married man.

When faced with an entrenched enemy, call out the big guns and attack both flanks as you do so.

@randomcarrot: You have a great deal of unwarranted faith in the police. Did you know that police departments select for lower IQ, because higher IQ brings independent thinking, and officers are just supposed to follow orders?

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Yes, any time a woman goes missing, they always look...

Well, truthandjustice99, if you are paying attention, they have evidence of her adultery, thanks to the PIs, so it would go in his favor still and be filed under adultery. He also knew what he was doing to prevent his prints from being found as well, so not likely, but yeah, it doesn't...

5 stars. Nothing more to say. I just wish this pollen would stop my eyes from tearing. -:) Excellent writing. Bob

Different and exciting though I'm not into male-male sex I enjoyed it. Well done.

Here's a few "L"s for their foreheads. L L L

There's no need to thank me, I keep a box for characters in stories just like this one.

Le thème de cette histoire est interessante. Le premier jet qui nous met dans l’histoire est réussi. Par contre l’intervention loufoque de son frère et sa belle sœur altère celle-ci, dommage ne pas avoir poussé plus loin l’investigation au Mariott a travers Magg pour en faire un...

This is one of the best series I've read in a long time. I wish the author could know how disappointed I am that it never got finished

Divorce the whore and find a good wife and better friends.

I think you did a very good job with all the characters, their emotions and their responses to this emotions! Well done!

Suspenseful story. Good emotional ending.

The only weak spot was the quick close up in Eden's office a good bit better.

But it is a great story definitely a favorite.