Lesbian Sex Story Comments

How much better can this story get, everything so well described, the emotions, fear, joy, love! The locations and little details of NY stores. The building trust between them, the painful/embarrassing confessions of past events, and of course all told in a very erotic framework!...

Cool story!

So, chapter 2 is just s repeat of chapter 1?? That sucks.

Aw Anonymous I know you won’t see this because you’re anon, but it means the world! Glad my 30k in student debt from my writing degree is worth it to some extent 😅

I thought I could write romantic stories.

I am humbled .

And dismayed by my inability to give but five stars.

Thank you.

What fun!! A dream!!! Cheers 🥂

Thank you so much, Wag xxxxx

I know this story is ,14 years old, I still enjoyed it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Great story plot, characters and writing. Thank you.

This is developing into a wonderful tale of eroticism and tenderness between Piper, Lettie and Lady Margaret. Delightful!

WHY! Oh why did you stop the scene there are time to leave us on edge with a cliffhanger but this wasn't one of them iy cost you a star for that. this is a remarkable story hope you keep it going for awhile. 4/5 stars.

Such a wonderful setup and payoff

Well done, as you covered two interrelated topics. The first was the story of two bi-curious women who were intelligent, good looking, drawn to each other, and over time seemingly to indulge each other's OCD tendencies by overthinking their progression to becoming a couple. Within...

I'd love another chapter, but if you don't feel it I get that. However, in the absence of another chapter can you please, please, please just drop these characters into the background of another story, married, happy, still together.

I'm sure I don't just speak for myself when I...

That was hot dam hot!!!! More

I Love this. But then I do love having my hair played with.

LOVE THIS. 2 pages is too short, what a tease! looking forward to part 2. Hot! Sweet! A dash of existentialism! And hot! lol Thanks!

And in the(ir) ends! Yes, the buttplugs are back 😀

That was truly beautiful, Freya. Very loving as always and the finger play was delicious and scintillating.

Another 5🌟 sexy instalment! Katie-Bear is becoming a more complex character.

I’ve read half a dozen or more of your stories. Your style demonstrates a delightful command of active voice construction. I know that doesn’t sound sexy, but it’s my highest compliment. What I just read was the best two pages I’ve seen on this site. You showed a complete mastery...

Oh my that ending. Aldo refreshing how fun the relationship is too. Xxx

OK, I lived in the middle of Kansas for 12 years. This story has a British accent, and very little resemblance to Kansas. There are conservative bible thumpers in Kansas, but what's missing in this story is any resemblance in the manner of speaking with Kansas, or any other part of...

That was quite fun . Got my knickers quite wet .

Chapter 11 itself is the best roller coaster ride ever! Your writing brings out the raw emotions of every character and makes this so rich in raw emotion; the romance, the heartbreak, the deep love is so vividly and beautifully written. I have read this chapter several times and it...

Beautifully executed. Well done!

Decent work. Favorite thing was the emotional attachment between the characters as usual. Looking forward to the next story.

@Aquariusgirl @AliceGee thank you so much! Don't worry: much, much more to come :) this is my favorite novella I've ever written and I can't wait for my readers to enjoy it!

You can read the entire novella now through the link on my page if you’d like to read & support me; as always, though, all chapters will be released on here for free gradually as well!

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A wonderful read with two likable and believable characters. I would have liked to know how they interacted in the morning but that will be up to the writer to decide if a follow up is needed.

The story is excellent and the writing is first class.

Thank you so much, wag xxxxx

Michael, what can I say? I am honoured, deeply so, that you should say such lovely things. I am sufficiently encouraged to venture a sequel - Lady Chatterley's maid. xxxxx

Reading the final edit of these chapters has been a joy. I loved the originals, and ButteredCrumpet and I had some entertaining conversations, in which I speculated on what Sarah was not saying. However, I think your edits have improved the story. As I discovered, there are still...

Very good. Don't keep me waiting to long for the next part.